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The table reflects the amount of data of tourists who visited Vietnam from different 8 countries
Overall
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, Australia is the highest forgiven
visitors
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 spending,
while
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 Cambodia is the second lowest one and the spending of Japanese and
Koreans
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visitors
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the
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half of the sending by the British one.
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 with, after analysis of the table Australia recorded the highest amount of tourist expenditure by 1893. And
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, the stayment days in China are double the stayment in USA 12.2 and 6.1, respectively the spending in the USA is relatively twice
of
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the spending in China
it
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hits
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 1238 ,658.
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, Cambodia recorded the lowest expenditures among the 8countires
it
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hits
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 120$. Despite the fact that
visitors
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 Japanese and Koreans almost double the statement of British 11.3, 10.9, 5.9they spend around half the British
visitors
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 spend 984,854,1379.
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, we divorced that the average sending is done by Russian
vistotrs
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visitors
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amount
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 of 798.

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