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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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Nowadays, improving the
transportation
 services of cities, railways, and public
transportation
 has a special role in
this
 sphere. In some selected countries, some
people
 believe that spending a large amount of money on building
railway
 lines with the aim of having very fast trains between cities is essential.
However
, others think that it should be spent on developing existing public
transportation
. I think that it would be an essential step in
this
 plan if both projects could be developed constantly. By developing
railway
 lines with the option of investment, it will take
this
 stage to that the cities will be flexibly connected to each other.
Railway
 transport is an important tool to make a reason which it will improve other
transportation
 services where there will be a variety of
the
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developed
transportation
 opportunities. After the investment in the
railway
 industry, there will be another reason for the development of city
transportation
: where
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incide
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inside
 of the
street's
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 links in the city will be easier and more complex than before. Spending money with the aim of developing public transport, will help to make comfortable commuting for
people
.
Moreover
,
people
 will
be encourage
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 to use
of
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the
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public
transportation
,
then
 the traffic jams that
people
 suffer from will be reduced.
Next,
there will be another successful development in the field of the environment. Because of the intensive usage of public
transportation
,
therefore
, environmental protection will be friendly. In conclusion, if the government takes both options into account in order to develop
such
 transport delivery difficulties,
then
 constantly the issues that could damage
people
's lives will
be easily vanished
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 from their lives.
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  • efficient
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