The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph indicates the
number
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of emissions released into the
air
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from various
sources
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in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
air
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pollutants
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released by the industry was much higher than other
sources
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.
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, there was a significant fall in the total amount of
air
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pollutants
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from all the
sources
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. In the year 1990, around 7
million
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tonnes
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of
air
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contaminants were emitted from all
the
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three different
sources
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which significantly dropped to approximately 4
million
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tonnes
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in 1999 and
then
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continued to fall to about 3
million
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tonnes
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by the end of the period. The total
number
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of
pollutants
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emitted into the
air
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gradually reduced to about 5
million
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tonnes
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by 2005.
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, the industry with the highest amount of contaminants with 5.5
million
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tonnes
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in 1990 gradually declined to about 2
million
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tonnes
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in 2005. Despite the figures for transport and household emissions being equal at the beginning of the period, there was a slight increase in the
number
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of
air
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pollutants
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from transport to 1
million
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tonnes
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by 2005,
while
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the household emission dropped to a negligible level at 0.1
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, air, sources, pollutants, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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