The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the
number
of emissions released into the
air
from various
sources
in the UK between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, the
number
of
air
pollutants
released by the industry was much higher than other
sources
.
Further
, there was a significant fall in the total amount of
air
pollutants
from all the
sources
. In the year 1990, around 7
million
tonnes
of
air
contaminants were emitted from all
the
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three different
sources
which significantly dropped to approximately 4
million
tonnes
in 1999 and
then
continued to fall to about 3
million
tonnes
by the end of the period. The total
number
of
pollutants
emitted into the
air
gradually reduced to about 5
million
tonnes
by 2005.
Further
, the industry with the highest amount of contaminants with 5.5
million
tonnes
in 1990 gradually declined to about 2
million
tonnes
in 2005. Despite the figures for transport and household emissions being equal at the beginning of the period, there was a slight increase in the
number
of
air
pollutants
from transport to 1
million
tonnes
by 2005,
while
the household emission dropped to a negligible level at 0.1
million
tonnes
at the end
of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, air, sources, pollutants, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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