The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015
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The chart illustrates the amount of money that was obtained from exporting five different things in a country in two years. The table gives information about the
rate
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of change in each type of product in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, petroleum
products
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are the best seller in both years
while
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the earnings from agricultural
products
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are the least.
Moreover
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, the
rate
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of export increased for all items except Jem's and jewellery. In detail, the country gained about 220
billion
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from these
products
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in 2015 and the sale
rate
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went up by nearly 10
billion
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by 2016. Petroleum
products
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earned 60
billion
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which is the largest and engineering goods obtained about 58
billion
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in 2015. By 2016, the amount of money from both of these
products
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increased to 62
billion
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. In terms of jewellery and agricultural
products
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consisted of nearly 70
billion
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in the given two years
while
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textiles earned about 27
billion
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in 2015 which was the smallest. In 2016, the sale
rate
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of textiles grew and reached 30
billion
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.
Moreover
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, the amount of money from jewellery
products
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decreased by 5 %. The export
rate
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of engineer goods went up by 8.5 %
while
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that of textiles soared by 15% which was the highest.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of sales of petroleum and agricultural
products
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increased by 3% and 0.5 respectively in 2016.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, products, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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