The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015
The chart illustrates the amount of money that was obtained from exporting five different things in a country in two years. The table gives information about the
rate
of change in each type of product in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, petroleum products
are the best seller in both years while
the earnings from agricultural products
are the least. Moreover
, the rate
of export increased for all items except Jem's and jewellery.
In detail, the country gained about 220 billion
from these products
in 2015 and the sale rate
went up by nearly 10 billion
by 2016. Petroleum products
earned 60 billion
which is the largest and engineering goods obtained about 58 billion
in 2015. By 2016, the amount of money from both of these products
increased to 62 billion
. In terms of jewellery and agricultural products
consisted of nearly 70 billion
in the given two years while
textiles earned about 27 billion
in 2015 which was the smallest. In 2016, the sale rate
of textiles grew and reached 30 billion
.
Moreover
, the amount of money from jewellery products
decreased by 5 %. The export rate
of engineer goods went up by 8.5 % while
that of textiles soared by 15% which was the highest. On the other hand
, the percentage of sales of petroleum and agricultural products
increased by 3% and 0.5 respectively in 2016.Submitted by aungmyatthu on
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