The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of export in 2016 compared to 2015
The chart illustrates the amount of money that was obtained from exporting five different things in a country in two years. The table gives information about the
rate
of change in each type of product in 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, petroleum
products
are the best seller in both years
while
the earnings from agricultural
products
are the least.
Moreover
, the
rate
of export increased for all items except Jem's and jewellery. In detail, the country gained about 220
billion
from these
products
in 2015 and the sale
rate
went up by nearly 10
billion
by 2016. Petroleum
products
earned 60
billion
which is the largest and engineering goods obtained about 58
billion
in 2015. By 2016, the amount of money from both of these
products
increased to 62
billion
. In terms of jewellery and agricultural
products
consisted of nearly 70
billion
in the given two years
while
textiles earned about 27
billion
in 2015 which was the smallest. In 2016, the sale
rate
of textiles grew and reached 30
billion
.
Moreover
, the amount of money from jewellery
products
decreased by 5 %. The export
rate
of engineer goods went up by 8.5 %
while
that of textiles soared by 15% which was the highest.
On the other hand
, the percentage of sales of petroleum and agricultural
products
increased by 3% and 0.5 respectively in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, products, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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