the pie charts show the percentage of watre used for fifferent purposes in six areas of the world.

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The six pie charts illustrate the different usages of

water

in six parts of the world including North

America

south

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South

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America

, Europe,

Africa

central

Capitalize word

Central

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Asia

and Southeast

Asia

in percentage

Overall

, four main parts of the world mainly

use

water

for agriculture.

While

using

water

for industrial and domestic usage

are

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the least among the six areas. The majority of

water

is used for agriculture in four different regions central

Asia

Africa

southeast

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Southeast

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Asia

and South

America

accounting for 88%, 84%,81% and 71% respectively.

On the other hand

, Europe and North

America

use

water

for

the

Correct article usage

apply

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industry making up 53% and 48% respectively of the total usage.

However

central

Asia

, southeast

Asia

and

Africa

use

the least

water

for domestic consumption showing only 7-9%.

Nonetheless

, the domestic

use

Africa

is 9% more than both

central

Capitalize word

Central

show examples

Asia

and Southeast

Asia

show 7%.

Additionally

,the

water

uses for industrial in central

Asia

is 5% which is the least among all regions.

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the pie charts show the percentage of watre used for fifferent purposes in six areas of the world.

Art classes,such as painting and drawing,are as importanrt to a child's development as other subjects,so it should be compulsory in high schools.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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