the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph enumerates the

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number of minutes of phone calls in the UK,in three different sectors between 1985 and 2002. It can be clearly seen that the figure for local-fixed lines increased till 1998 and was much higher than that for fixed lines. Categorically speaking, the number of minutes in the local - fixed line rose sharply from 1995 to 1998,starting with just over 70 billion and showing a steadiness during the next 1 year.Without a doubt,

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trend decreased dramatically and remained the same as it was 7 years ago.

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,we can see that the amount of time spent on national and international fixed lines,climbed moderately just presenting an upward trend,reaching a peak of 60 billion. On top of that, the graph for mobiles was the smallest tendency among others

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providing just under 10 billion,but

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,the number of minutes of mobile calls marked an upward trend.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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150 words

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the chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the uk, divided into three categories, from 19985- 2002. summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant.

Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think It's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?