The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram reflects details regarding the use of shared transport in a particular state,
according to
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as well as
location. Linking Words
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essay will focus on analyzing and comparing the use of public vehicles in 2016, based on various criteria. Linking Words
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, the use of public vehicles, Linking Words
such
as buses, is popular Linking Words
in
large city residents, especially Change preposition
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in
adults. Change preposition
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On the other hand
, in other residents, the percentage number is significantly lower and decreases with time.
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, we can observe that in vast cities, the prominent age group is between 31 and 45. In fact, around 65% of people from Linking Words
this
group opt for not having personal vehicles. Linking Words
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, it has a major decline, starting from the age of 46.
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, in other Linking Words
residents
we can see that the number of people using common transport is remarkably lower. Despite Add a comma
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, the common transport is mostly used by young adults. Around 28% of people between 16 and 30, prefer public transportation.Linking Words
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