The graph below shows the consumption of meat in Spain between 2001 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart gives information about the
consumption
of six different meats
between 2001 and 2011.
At the beginning of the period, beef was the most popular meat in 2001. The initial amount consumed was more than 700 Change the wording
types of meat
slices of meat
lumps of meat
portions of meat
grams
per person
per week
. However
, between 2001 and 2007, the figure declined to less than 400 grams
. Duck consumption
was the only other figure that declined in a similar way during this
time. This
figure fell from 500 grams
to 300 grams
per person
per week
.
On the other hand
, pork
and chicken consumption
increased in a similar way between 2001 and 2007. Pork
consumption
increased from 450 grams
to 700 per person
per week
. This
trend did not continue after 2007. After 2007, chicken consumption
increased to 900 grams
, but pork
consumption
remained stable. Lastly
, consumption
of goat and veal showed relatively stable trends over the period. The consumption
of these meats was 100 grams
and 200 grams
per person
per week
, respectively. However
, it is noteworthy that goat consumption
briefly increased to approximately 280 grams
in 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
chicken and pork
were the two meats
that showed the most notable increases in Change the wording
types of meat
slices of meat
lumps of meat
portions of meat
consumption
, and beef and duck consumption
notably declined throughout the period.Submitted by yjja23 on
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