During last twenty years, the assessment of students has undergone a major transformation. Many educational institutions have shifted their focus from traditional examination towards variety of innovative assessment techniques, as they believe traditional examination results are not often true to student's ability. To what extent do you agree with this?

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preferred. In conclusion, it is true that the ways of grading have been changed, and I agree that in several schools the examiners are utilising the updated techniques for making results of mid-term and final-term exams.
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