You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to tak

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Dear Sir or Madam, I writing

this

letter to report an invaluable item which I lost on one of your

train

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. My name is Muskan.

Last

Saturday, I forgot my inherited watch on seat number B25. Basically, it is a square shape watch with a blue band and white stripes which was gifted to me by my late grandfather on my 18th birthday. I travelled to Banff using the

train

MMF23 seat number B25 at 1:00 in the afternoon on 7th August. After getting off the

train

I was moving towards the exit of the Banff station, when I realized that I left my watch on my seat, so I ran towards the

train

. But by the time I reached the

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platform I saw that the

train

was all set to go. I talked with the station master, and he told me to contact you. I will really appreciate it if you can search for it and send it back to me at my address.You can use the express courier to return it. Looking forward to your considerate reply. Yours sincerely, Muskan.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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182 words

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