The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture lays off four diagrams describing energy generation by different types of fuel in
Australia
and France
in 1980 and 2000. This
writing will summarize some important information and compare them when necessary.
Overall
, the two nations produced more electricity and used less natural gas in 2000 than in 1980.
First,
in the year 1980, Australia
produced 100 units
of the total energy while
France
only generated 90 units
. As time went on, France
surpassed Australia
's ability to make power, Napoleon's beloved country made 180 units
worth of power, meanwhile, Australia
was only capable of generating 170 units
in 2000. This
phenomenon was caused by the innovation of the latest nuclear power applied by the French.
Moreover
, Australia
utilizes more water potential energy, in contrast
, France
uses less hydropower. On the other hand
, the country of koala,
depletes more coal than Remove the comma
apply
France
. In addition
, in 2000, the utilization of oil as a source to turn on electric machinery can be decreased in Australia
, in contrast
to France
which was not able to do it.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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