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The flowchart descibed the process of making clothes out of recycled plastic bottles. The process had 12 steps in total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where releveant.

The process diagram illustrates how recycled plastic
bottles
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 are converted to clothes in 12 different stages.
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, there are 6 different procedures after bringing the
bottles
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 to the processing plant to make yarn out of those
bottles
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.
Finally
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, the yarns undergo 3
further
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 procedures to make clothing. The process commences when the plastic
bottles
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 are
load
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loaded
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 into trucks and moved to the factory.
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, the
bottles
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 are sorted, after which they are cut down into small
pieces
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 and transferred to a machine designed for washing and cleaning those
pieces
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.
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the wet
pieces
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 are exposed to sunlight to get dry. Once
this
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 stage is complete, the dried
pieces
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 are boiled and strained, resulting
to
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in
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 the yarns. The
emerged
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emerging
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 yarns go
thorough
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through
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 3 more stages.
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the yarn is
weaved
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woven
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. After that, the weaved yarn is converted to fabric rolls. The process ends when the fabric rolls are used to produce various clothes.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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