You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie graphs illustrated how much time employed adults had in percentages by doing some activities in a specific nation in 1958 and 2008.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, from 1958 to 2008 most of the habits presented higher time spent by comparing the percentages. It was shown that workers slept 7% more in 1958 ( 32%) than in 2008 (25%).
The other activities increased in this
50-year gap except for travel to work which appeared to be only 2% in 1958 and in 2008 8%, around 4 times more.
In addition
, relaxing at home had a surprisingly increased, 8% in 1958 and 13% in 2008.
To conclude
, 4 particular activities had more time spent by worker adults in comparison to only three that presented a diminished in the total of seven habits demonstrated at the pie chats.Submitted by jamilameneses on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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