The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentages of Australian
females
and males doing regular physical activity in different age
groups in the year 2010.
Overall
, women stand first in all age
groups, except the 15 to 24 age
group
which men
ranked first. Moreover
, the highest percentage of females
doing exercise regularly accounts for the 45 to 54 age
group
.
In the 15 to 24 age
group
, men
stood first,
and the figure for men
was 52.8%, while
that for women was lower by a narrow margin of 5%. By increasing age
groups, the share of women who did regular physical activity increased slightly, while
that of men
decreased to 39.5% which was the minimum percentage in the 35 to 44 age
group
.
The highest proportion of females
who did exercise regularly accounted for the 45 to 54 age
group
with 53.3%, then
it declined to 47.1% in 65 and over, whereas
the figure for males was almost the same as that for females
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