The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
These two given maps illustrate
the
Bunborough Correct article usage
apply
village
in the current time and in the future respectively.
Overall
, it will has
been some dramatic changes by 2004. Change the verb form
have
Moreover
, based on proposed
map, Add an article
the proposed
a proposed
it is clear that
this
region will have become more developed and touristy until 2004.
At first glance, a new train line can be seen which will be installed in this
area and also
a novel road will be built in this
village
as well for improving transport options in this
village
. Moreover
, it can be observed that in the former locations of fishing ports, a promenade will be constructed and because of the fact that there exist
Correct subject-verb agreement
exists
high
possibility of tourists' presence in Add an article
the high
a high
this
camping place in the future time, some new touristic amenities should be added to this
village
and as it can be get
from the proposal map, two new Change the verb form
get
hotel
will be constructed in the beside the proposed road.Change to a plural noun
hotels
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