Many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe grandparents can take care of their children, while others think t=childcare centres are better. discuss both views and give your opinion?

In recent years, both parents are busy working. some

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prefer to send

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to daycare centres,

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others believe

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can take care of

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better. I will discuss both choices and I agree that the childcare

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is a better place. On the one hand, the childcare

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is a more professional and friendly place for

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's upbringing. First of all, all the teachers are well trained to communicate with the little babies

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and are capable to teach

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not only knowledge but

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good behaviour. Many

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would accept the suggestions of teachers rather than that of relatives. On top of that, the daycare

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is an important space for

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to learn socializing and communication skills with others. They can learn to share, to make friends, and even to apologize, all of which are necessary to make them prepared for future school life and adult life. 

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, there are some drawbacks for both

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's personalities and extended families. On the

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level,

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will have a great impact on

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's personalities and behaviour.

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, as some elderly

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prefer to be living in a quiet environment,

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children

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they take care of are likely to have lots of limitations to play around or do exercise, which in the long term probably makes them shy or lack

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energy. In other cases,

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as in China,

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are more likely to spoil

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and give them whatever they want because of the hard life older

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have gone through, and

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cultivating approach might make

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selfish. From

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familiy

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family

perspective, there is a risk that

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overtake the responsibility for young parents. Elderly

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tend to take more housework for the small family when taking care of babies.

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, young parents might have a bad habit to avoid the

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responsibilities

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of the family. In conclusion, for the modern young families, bringing up

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in the

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centre

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is a better way

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of giving the burden to

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