Many people believe that home-cooked meals are better for one’s health. Those who disagree argue that it is healthier to eat restaurant meals. What’s your opinion?

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Nowadays, as people’s fortune accumulates and society develops, individuals

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spending a lot of money eating out at diners. But I think that every individual should prepare their meal at home. On the one hand, restaurant

cooked-

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cooked meals

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meals

are healthier because the food

are

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cooked by expert chefs who have great knowledge of nutrition. They know how to match different

ingredients

and adopt the right cooking method to maximize the nutritional value of the

meals

they cook.

In addition

restaurants

must follow health laws,

therefore

, the quality of

meals

and hygiene of their kitchen should be guaranteed. To illustrate, a recent survey conducted by RMIT University, found that the majority of

restaurants

are busy

hence

they fail to maintain hygiene on a daily basis in their

restaurants

On the other hand

, I think that home-cooked

meals

are healthier because

restaurants

are running a business and their primary goal is to maximize profit.

Therefore

, they may be unwilling to throw away expired

ingredients

and may add unnecessary additives to cover poor

ingredients

Whereas

if people cook at home, they can ensure that they use fresh

ingredients

For instance

, they would go to the market and buy fresh produce and would throw away spoiled food items.

Furthermore

, home cooks can ensure that their kitchen is always cleaned properly, and they can control the amount of unhealthy

ingredients

such

as sugar, salt and oil used,

thus

preparing healthier

meals

. In conclusion, it cannot be denied that

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there are many positive aspects of takeaway

meals

However

, I believe that people should spare time to cook for themselves as much as they can to maintain a healthy diet.

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