In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water From both industry and construction. what measures could be taken to prevent this.

The growth of industry and construction has fostered air and water pollution in developing countries.
However
, industrialization has some negative consequences, solutions will mitigate these problems. There are several problems related to
this
trend. The main issue is
people
will exposure many
disease
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example, lung
disease
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diseases
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like Lung cancer.
In other words
,
people
won't be able to breathe in and breathe out,
thus
their chores and tasks will be messy.
As a result
, the government have to care about healthcare. Another problem is the weather will change and become hotter than normal,
Furthermore
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it affects the ice of the poles,
morever
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moreover
it causes
that
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the ice
melt
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and it's very dangerous for
people
generally for
human
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humans
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, animals and the world.
Thirdly
complication is about natural
disaster
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,
such
as
Flood
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floods
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, drought and forest fires because of an imbalance in biodiversity.
Finally
, acid rain will fall which will cause the extinction of natural species. For solving these dilemmas
that
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mentioned above there are various solutions.
Firstly
, the government should enact a plan for planting
alot
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a lot
of different trees in residential places or all around the country
especially
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industrial cities.
Secondly
, they should encourage
people
to use
instead
of non-renewable like Solar energy
energy
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Thirdly
increasing • energy costs makes
people
pay more attention to fuel
consemption
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consumption
.
On the other hand
, the government can reward
to
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contributors who use less
of
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fuel to increase the quality of
cuir
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fuel
and water. In Conclusion, diverse solutions can create
the
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world
which
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in which
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there's not much
airpollution
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air pollution
and
also
Can tackle the problems to generate a clean environment to make a growth of quality of air and water.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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