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now days many people choose to be self-employed rather than working in organization, what are the causes ? and what are the disadvantages of being self-employed

#people #organization
Nowadays technology is expanding day by day so it has
increaed
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increased
created
 a need of local people. Communities have changed
thier
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their
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a perticular
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perticular
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particular
 company and started working as an individual.
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light
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 the reason causes
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 impact of being self-employed.
To begin
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due to
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advancement in all the ways most
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the
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teenagers have started working as an individual or freelancer
work
 to obtain certain goals. Not only
this
,
this
 approach will able to help them to manage
work life
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 balance rather
being
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 an employed under organization.
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Furthermore
, they
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 to explore all the
opportunies
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opportunities
instead
 of doing one
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particular
work
 for
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.
For example
, most
of
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IIT
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 students have started working as an entrepreneur
instead
 of working in
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MNCs
 and
became
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a
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reachiest
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richest
preachiest
person
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people
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of
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 the country.
On the other hand
, there will be a
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detrimental
 effect if someone would choose
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work
 for any company, because they may
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to
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sacrifice their short-term financial need as
new
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business
are
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 always required fresh investments. In
addision
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addition
, they may fall into debt
due to
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 and
further
 repercussions
such
 as depression, anxiety etc.
For instance
, youngsters are more tend to become
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bankrupt
 in
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 because everyone wants to start
own
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their own
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business
 without having
proper
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business
 model analysis.
In contrast
, sometimes they became
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role modem for the next generation if they are able to achieve success. In conclusion, all the right steps may help to build
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 future and any wrong
dession
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decision
 may have
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adserve
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adverse
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society. Being
a
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self-employed will always
benfited
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benefit
 if they will understand the
business
 before leaving or avoiding jobs in
nearby
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the nearby
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 company.
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