You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: - apologise for the damage to the item - explain what happened - say how you are going to fix the issue**

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I hope are things going well . I would like to say thank you for borrowing me the

dress

to wear

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my sister's wedding . It was the

awesome

Correct quantifier usage

most awesome

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dress

I have seen it I should apologize to you

due to

the

dress

you gave me has been damaged accidentally. Let me explain what happened that day . I put the

dress

on my bed

during

Correct word choice

while

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I took a shower unfortunately , my cat stayed on it so my cat tore a small part of

dress

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the dress

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also

he ate a button from the

dress

I was extremely cautious about the

dress

Therefore

I am going to fix it as soon as possible. It might take 5 days to 10 days I

tohope

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hope

to hope

finish it earliest to back it to you Many thanks again to you and I am completely sorry to you I hope

this

never happens again in future Yours faithfully

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.** **Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:** - **apologise for the damage to the item** - **explain what happened** - **say how you are going to fix the issue**

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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It was predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than past. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Some people think that money spent on protecting wild animals would be better than spending on improving the lives of the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are not able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Explain why you cannot go - say that you will give your friend a gift the next time you see him/her -suggest another time and place to meet

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