The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

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The data provided in the form of a table compares the

population

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of four nations in 2003 and a prediction for

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population

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the population

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rate in 2025 and 2050.

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, Indonesia was the most populated country compared with Argentina, Italy and the Republic of Korea over the surveyed period.

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figures for all mentioned regions continue to increase, except Italy which is projected to experience a fall in the number of its people. In 2003, the number of people who resided in Indonesia stood at 238

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authorities believe that

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figure would reach 274 and 314 in 2025 and 2050, respectively.

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Italy was the second most crowded nation with 54

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people, there would be a slight decrease in the figures of

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rate in 2025 and 25 years later and would reach a low of 45. There would be a significant rise in the number of citizens in Argentina from 34 in 2003 to 62 in the next 23 years. Despite a 4

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growth in the Republic of Korea

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from 2003 until almost the next 20 years,

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figure would remain constant at 52

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till 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some poeople say History is one of the most important school subject and people think that, in todays;s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to a university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?