In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. what are the advantages and disadvanteges of such a solution?
Indeed,
government
should impose heavy taxes on private car Add an article
the government
owners
in order to improve public transportation. There are numerous factors contributing towards it that solve traffic issues. Now adays
every private car Correct your spelling
Nowadays
owners
wants to travel by own Fix the agreement mistake
owner
transport
creating a jigsaw puzzle all around. The congested roads with heavy traffic disturbs
a Change the verb form
disturb
person
mental health.
Change noun form
person's
To begin
with plenty of benefits, it would allow people to reach destinations with in
less time than usual ultimately saving time as time is money. Correct your spelling
within
Moreover
fuel prices are already cloud nine Add a comma
,Moreover
due to
increasing inflation at high rates. Public transport
will enable individuals to save money by less fuel consumption. Consequently
, few cars on road
Correct article usage
the road
means
less number of accidents. Change the verb form
mean
Additionally
public Add a comma
,Additionally
transport
creates a large amount of revenue being an economical source of a country. More people will prefer public vehicles so more money can be generated. Recently Pakistan
mass transit authority launched Change noun form
Pakistan's
metro
bus project .The government generated huge income that encouraged Correct article usage
a metro
owners
to promote such
projects further
.
On the other hand
, it grants numerous disadvantages .When govt will start
imposing Wrong verb form
starts
tax
burden Correct article usage
a tax
every
private car Correct determiner usage
apply
owners
will stop buying vehicles .This
particular industry will get adversely affected. Moreover
, various contagious diseases might spread if patient
travel in public Fix the agreement mistake
patients
transport
.Therefore
it will turn out to be a great mess. However
,public transport
do
consider every terminal Change the verb form
does
according to
passengers but every person do
not Change the verb form
does
gets
benefited Change the verb form
get
due to
remote areas instead
of stations. Last
but not least public transport
is not safe too.
I do not agree to
the notion that govt should impose heavy taxes on private Change preposition
with
transport
.Though public transport
should be provided to the non-affording community. On the other
hand
private cars should be encouraged simultaneously. Add a comma
,hand
Instead
, restrict the number of cars to owners
to avoid congested traffic.Submitted by ahsanislam96 on
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