You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rohit, Hope you're well. I'm excited to let you know that, I'm coming to visit London next month, Plus,

this

is my first visit which is why I need some suggestions from you. First of all, can you please help me in deciding on a present for your parents? I thought that I can give them a dinner set, can you please confirm it? if not,

then

please suggest any other present for them. Can you please suggest some good adventure and sightseeing activities in London? And yes, I

also

need suggestions for clothes which I can carry for the next month. And, shall I carry a jacket with me or not? As winters will start from next month. I know, there are many Indian restaurants in London but I need home-like food. Since if I'll eat restaurant food for a week I'll get some gut issues, and definitely I don't want it. Waiting to see you. All the best, Jaskaran

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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