You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rohit, Hope you're well. I'm excited to let you know that, I'm coming to visit London next month, Plus,

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is my first visit which is why I need some suggestions from you. First of all, can you please help me in deciding on a present for your parents? I thought that I can give them a dinner set, can you please confirm it? if not,

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please suggest any other present for them. Can you please suggest some good adventure and sightseeing activities in London? And yes, I

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need suggestions for clothes which I can carry for the next month. And, shall I carry a jacket with me or not? As winters will start from next month. I know, there are many Indian restaurants in London but I need home-like food. Since if I'll eat restaurant food for a week I'll get some gut issues, and definitely I don't want it. Waiting to see you. All the best, Jaskaran

KaranAwal15Sat Aug 12 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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