The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes(in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of phone calls in the types of local, national and international and mobile calls in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest usage for calls is local calls in fixed lines,
while
the lowest one is mobiles for all calls.
However
, there is an increasing trend in the use of mobile and national and international ones throughout the whole period, which the difference between the three types of calls much smaller
at the end
of the period. From 1995 to 1999, local calls rise from around 72 to 90
billion
, which was the highest point during the period. In comparison to the other two categories,these are all below 50
billion
. The national and international calls rise slightly,approximately 38
billion
to 48
billion
, but the calls for mobiles are far less, from 2
billion
to 8
billion
. Compare to the
last
three years, from 2000 to 2002, the figure for local calls present a downward trend, at 82
billion
decreased to 70
billion
roughly.
In contrast
, both the figures for national and international and mobile calls are on an upward trend and reach the highest point in 2002, the one for national and international steadily climbed to 60
billion
,
while
the one for mobile soars to around 40
billion
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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