some people think that getting adegree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe it would be better to go straight to work and get experiance instead. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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good

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to have

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a

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school is better so you have

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work

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degree

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get the

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instead

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degree

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accurate only depends what are the person's expectations in life and how they want to

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they

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life for some

people

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make them happy so they just need to get

experience

through life.

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be obtain

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if you go to

university

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study

in

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there.

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, when you

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to

university

you are increasing

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knowledge which can open doors in the

future

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in

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university

in some

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can make you have the jobs you want in the

future

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people

coming from oxford

university

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thinks

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to get a good

job

you have to go to

university

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, some jobs

not

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require

to

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go to

university

to start working on them and you just get the

work

experience

by working in them. Some

works

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such

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or plumbing or waitress you

not required

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a

degree

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work

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job

give you

experience

and the money you need to

be want

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you

want

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in the

future

.

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,

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is

hand

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on

career

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which you only can learn by

experience

. In conclusion, some

people

thinks

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for gain a good

job

you need to go to

university

and other believe you just need to get

work

experience

through the

job

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these

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essay

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we review both

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of

views

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. In my opinion, both are important and

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of

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each individual what would like to do in the

future

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