The following table shows the number of factory workers for a given time period in Germany.
The provided table depicts the
number
of male and female employees of factories
and the number
of factories
in 1851, 1861, 1871, 1881, 1891 ,and 1901 in Germany. A glance at the table reveals that although
the number
of factories
almost tripled in 1871 from 227 to 622, the total number
of workers
dropped by around 50% from 291,780 to 140,123.
In 1851, the number
of male workers
was almost one and a half times the number
of female workers
at 287,100 in 225 factories
. In 1861, while
the number
of factories
rose by two, the total employees
declined to 291,780 ,and Interestingly, Correct quantifier usage
number of employees
this
was the only year during the provided period that female workers
were higher in number
at 160,000. In 1871, despite the fact that the number
of factories
increased significantly from 227 to 622, the number
of female and male workers
decreased to 60,000 and 80,123 respectively.
By 1881, Germany had 99 more factories
but, the total number
of workers
declined. In 1891, 65,000 men and 40,000 females were working in 625 factories
. In the last
year of the given period, around a hundred people worked for each factory and the number
of males and females were almost the same at 31,000 and 30,000 respectively.Submitted by Nima on
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