Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Ma'am, hope

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letter finds you well and in good spirits.I Payal Sharma and writing to you for applying the job you are offering.I have seen an advertisement for a household

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summer. I feel that I have what it takes to deliver excellent house help.I am studying hospitality management and I assure you that I have great experience in it.I can help you with the garden as well , to be honest, I don't know much about it but I will help you if you just provide me with guidance.

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, if you are able to assist me in what work you are looking to do by me I would make myself ready for it. the most appealing thing I found about

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job is in summer vacation that means I can use my spare time productively and of course earning some quid would not be a bad idea. I would like to work in the afternoon but Sunday when I booked myself for the piano lessons. If I would get a job it would be a platform for the skills which I am developing through my course.

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, I am known to make a delicious dinner especially, English cuisine. I would not disappoint you in that too. please let me know if there is something I need to consider. Hope for hearing from you soon. Thank you, Payal Sharma

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

233 words

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Domestic chores
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