Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?
There are controversial perspectiveS heating UP a debate over how to live
healthy
. Change the adjective
healthily
While
scientists claim that there are a wealth of activities
suitable with
people’s health, some opposites still act Change preposition
for
bad
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like bad
activities
. This
essay is devoted to the underlying roots, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to this
alarming problem.
Without a shadow of a doubt, a large number of useful advices
from professional experts, Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
however
, people ignore them and have numerous harmful activities
, especially smoking. This
is because people have a tendency to use smoke
in order to decrease stress when they have been under pressure in their lives. Moreover
, the low price of smoke
is one of the reasons for Wrong verb form
smoking
this
problem. For example
, Vietnamese man utilize smoke
with high frequency from young to old age because of anxiety in their work and every smoke
is fifteen thousand Viet Nam Dong. Hence
, the price and the bad habit of user
are common justifications.
Correct article usage
the user
While
the reasons are widely acknowledge
, it is necessary to introduce far-reaching solutions for troubles. The government acts as Change the verb form
are widely acknowledged
precursor
in minimizing Add an article
a precursor
this
negative status. For example
, the Viet Nam governor give some rules to limit it such
as:
increasing Remove the comma
apply
tax
for Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
smoke
product
and so on. Fix the agreement mistake
products
Moreover
, the
society projects are one of the most efficient resolutions. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, in Thailand, tremendous state advert about the negative impacts of smoke
to
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on
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the user
user
and surrounding Fix the agreement mistake
users
other
with the aim of decreasing it. Correct pronoun usage
others
Thus
, rising smoke
tax and advertising intensive
effects of it should be done Add a hyphen
advertising-intensive
due to
people’s health.
In conclusion, it is vital for people to increase awareness of bad activities
, especially smoking. In addition
, the government and state have main
responsibility for their Add an article
the main
residents’s
well-being.Remove the s
residents’
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