Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that million of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?

There are controversial perspectiveS heating UP a debate over how to live
healthy
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.
While
scientists claim that there are a wealth of
activities
suitable
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people’s health, some opposites still act
bad
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like bad
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activities
.
This
essay is devoted to the underlying roots, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to
this
alarming problem. Without a shadow of a doubt, a large number of useful
advices
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from professional experts,
however
, people ignore them and have numerous harmful
activities
, especially smoking.
This
is because people have a tendency to use
smoke
in order to decrease stress when they have been under pressure in their lives.
Moreover
, the low price of
smoke
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smoking
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is one of the reasons for
this
problem.
For example
, Vietnamese man utilize
smoke
with high frequency from young to old age because of anxiety in their work and every
smoke
is fifteen thousand Viet Nam Dong.
Hence
, the price and the bad habit of
user
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are common justifications.
While
the reasons
are widely acknowledge
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, it is necessary to introduce far-reaching solutions for troubles. The government acts as
precursor
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in minimizing
this
negative status.
For example
, the Viet Nam governor give some rules to limit it
such
as
:
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increasing
tax
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taxes
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for
smoke
product
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products
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and so on.
Moreover
,
the
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society projects are one of the most efficient resolutions.
For instance
, in Thailand, tremendous state advert about the negative impacts of
smoke
to
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the user
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user
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users
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and surrounding
other
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others
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with the aim of decreasing it.
Thus
, rising
smoke
tax and
advertising intensive
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effects of it should be done
due to
people’s health. In conclusion, it is vital for people to increase awareness of bad
activities
, especially smoking.
In addition
, the government and state have
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responsibility for their
residents’s
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residents’
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well-being.
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