Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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dear mrs barret , I hope

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I saw your advertisement regarding the need for a person who helps you with your home chores in the upcoming summer. I can assist you with your every work , with your guidance I will do everything whatever you expected out of me ,as I have completed my graduation nowadays I am free at home and I want to earn some money so I feel suitable for

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opportunity. I am preparing for my competitive exam which will be held on next month , for its preparation I will not be able to come on weekends as I have to study. feel free to contact me if you find me suitable for

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job. yours sincerely Suman Preet Kaur

Submitted by kdilpreet631 on Sun Aug 13 2023

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

139 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this ? How can this problem be overcome?

Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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