The table below gives information on UK males’ and females’ average hours and minutes on different daily activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data about the amount of
time
per day that has been done by gender in several activities such
as sleep, personal care, and sport in British.
Looking at the information in more detail, both females and males dedicated more of their hours to sleep than other activities. Also
, there are significant differences in the hour spent on housework and employment,
and study between Remove the comma
apply
men
and female.
On average, both genders spent well over 8 hours sleeping. Also
, leisure activities take up the second longest proportion such
as reading and sport with about 72 minutes
men
spent higher than women
. On the other hand
, men
unexpectedly have just under 1.5 hours spend their time
working and studying. While
women
spend more than this
time
on housework.
It is noticeable that women
spend 32 minutes
on childcare which is close to this
time
for men
, 15 minutes
per day. By contrast
, male spends their day travelling just over 1 hour and 30 minutes
but women
spend 1 hour and 22 minutes
on this
activity.Submitted by Poseidous on
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