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Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime ‎while others like to change the type of job they do. Discuss both views and give ‎your opinion.‎

#people #work #type #job #lifetime #‎while #change #‎your
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 is inevitable in everyone's
life
. There are many who
belives
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 to
work
 in
same
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the same
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 job for
whole
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their whole
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life
whereas
 some
people
 fancy
to
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changing
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change
the
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their
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work
time
by
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over
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time
. Both
the
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arguments will discuss in
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further
. On the
one
 hand, some
people
chooses
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choose
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 to
work
 in
same
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the same
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 place. There are a plethora of reasons
of
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this
 scenario.
First
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 and foremost cause is job security and comfort. In
this
 fast pace
world
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,world
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 everyone needs money to survive and to earn money
one
 must have a good kind of job. So some
people
 are afraid to
loose
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 their employment in order to find new
one
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ones
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. Other than that employee fears
to accept
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accepting
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the new
challanges
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challenges
challenge
comes
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that comes
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 with the new company. Some
finds
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find
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 it really difficult to adjust
in
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to
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new
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the new
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enviornment
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environment
.
people
doesn't
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don't
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 want to come out of
the
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their
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 comfort zone and not have enough guts to try a new thing.
On the other hand
 , some prefer to
change
 in their
life
 so they choose to switch their
work
time
 by
time
.
Firstly
, you can learn new skills if you choose to
work
 for
differnt
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different
 firms.
One
 can have enough
expireance
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experience
 to deal
serious
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with serious
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 problems in
life
. By working for various companies
one
 can have knowledge about every field. Some
likes
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like
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 to explore every field by working . By agglomerating all the points aforementioned
abouve
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above
one
 can reach
to
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apply
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the conclusion that
,
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apply
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both
the
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apply
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scenario has
thier
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their
 own merits and demerits but
people
 has to
change
 their
work
 to
expiereance
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experience
 new skills in their lives.
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