The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The given maps illustrate how the town named Islip looked like in 1980 and how it was planned to be changed in 2005.
elimination of the countryside and the location of industrial buildings and public
Overall
, it is clear that
there were significant changes planned in order to develop the town, such
asCorrect article usage
the
places
.
To begin
with, looking at the map of 1980, the major part of the North was taken by the countryside, while
in 2005 it was proposed to eliminate this
area and replace it with the dual carriageway road that will go around the residential district, industrial buildings and places
of entertainment. There were two lines of shops
in 1980, however
in 2005, it was suggested to establish a big shopping centre Add a comma
,however
instead
of one line of shops
and to keep shops
in the middle a bit larger in size. For safety, the pedestrian area was added, which makes it easier to access some places
, such
as bus stations, car parks and shops
.
In conclusion, the map in 2005 proposed ideas which make it easier for people to access places
as well as
to use their own cars and public transportation.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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