The charts below show the average percentages in typicl meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The charts illustrate the average percentages of three main meal nutrients, all of which may be harmful if eaten so much.
Overall
, it is evident that Americans consume the major percentages of Linking Words
sodium
and saturated fat at dinner,Use synonyms
while
there is the largest rate of Linking Words
consumption
of added Use synonyms
sugar
is in snacks.
It can be noted that dinner is the main source of Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat with 43% and 37% respectively, Use synonyms
along with
it containing about a quarter of daily Linking Words
consumption
of added Use synonyms
sugar
. It can not be ignored that there is the second source of Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat Use synonyms
that is
lunch with 29% and 26% respectively.
For breakfast, all three recorded types of ingredients are the lowest rate at which US citizens are eaten with 14% of Linking Words
sodium
, 16% of saturated fat and 16% of added Use synonyms
sugar
. Use synonyms
Finally
, snacks contain only 14% and 21% of Linking Words
sodium
and saturated fat in American daily Use synonyms
consumption
. Use synonyms
However
, dominates added Linking Words
sugar
Use synonyms
consumption
with 42%.Use synonyms
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