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the graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The provided bar chart illustrates information about the change in the percentage of
waste
 recycled from 2000 to 2010, with data presented in five-year intervals in the percentage scale.The
waste
 type
includ
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includes
 plastic, cans, paper,
metal
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and metal
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 .
Overall
, the four kinds of
waste
 recycled's percentage went up more than at the
begining
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beginning
 of the period. Significantly,
waste
 of metal had the highest percentages
of
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among them. In 2000, at the start date of
survey
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the survey
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, almost
waste
 of around 90
percent
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per cent
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 of it was not recycled. Only 10
percent
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per cent
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 was recycled.
However
,the
waste
recycled
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recycling
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 of metal
rate
 was increased to 30
percent
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per cent
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 in 2005. Compared to the previous survey year about tripled.
On the other hand
, the recycled
rate
 of cans
only
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is only
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 a little lower than
2005
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in 2005
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.That down
rate
 was just about one or two
percent
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per cent
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.
Although
 the study started dates recycled only 10
percent
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per cent
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,
four
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of four
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 kinds
waste
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of waste
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recyceled
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recycled
 about 40
percent
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per cent
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 in 2010. Metal recycling's
rate
incresed
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increased
 to 40
percent
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per cent
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 and cans
which
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apply
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rate
 went down in 2005
dramaticly
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dramatically
 increased to 30
percent
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per cent
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. Other
waste
 went up : plastic and paper, about
25percent
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25 per cent
 and 29
percent
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per cent
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, percent, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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