The graph compares the percentage of international students and the percentage of UK learners gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university.
The provided bar chart information about the change in
UK
and international pupils
gained second
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second-class
class
degrees or better at a major UK
university in 2009 , with data presented on a percentage scale. Overall
, the UK
students
the
most population second Change preposition
with the
class
degrees or better were sociology . However
, the international pupils
were the most liked class
of
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in
inforamtion
technology.
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information
UK
students
were not interested in classes
of inforamtion
technology and electrical engineering , about 55%, and about 60% respectively. Correct your spelling
information
However
, the classes
were very intertested
by international Correct your spelling
interested
pupils
, around 80% and about 83% respectively. And, the number of two types of students
that gained second nursing and accountancy classes
degrees or better was almost the same figure.
In addition
, the classes
of international law , soiciology
, Correct your spelling
sociology
english
literature and art history tended to Change the capitalization
English
the
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apply
UK
students
than
international Correct quantifier usage
more than
students
. Specially
, the number of international law Replace the word
Especially
class
learning the UK
stdudents
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students
were
higher than international Correct subject-verb agreement
was
pupils
of
gaining a degree and better, by about 20%.Change preposition
apply
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