In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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an essential part of life in many societies.In some ,countries governments are advancing different industries fields and businesses to shift to the outskirts.

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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of shifting a company and factory outside of cities. Admittedly,there are some drawbacks related to

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issue as an economy and difficulties in delivering.The first disadvantage of

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would be the economy;simply because of the cost,the government must

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the company's reconstruction which will be worth a large amount of money.

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,at ,first should be destroyed the former factory in the city and

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it will rebuild in the suburbs.

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process

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to

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spend a great amount of money

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construction machines to building materials.

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way,the country's recession might

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.Another drawback is that

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an agriculture industry will supply spoiled production.

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, suppliers of fruits or vegetables have to go through a long distance which is responsible for spoiling vegetables

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as tomatoes,cabbage and potatoes.

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,I believe that the benefits are more significant than a few disadvantages.

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,the relocating of the factory can empty some place which old manufactures were located.These locations might be used for new schools,housing or supermarkets.

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development will aid

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the environment of the city.All manufacturers have been included to realise smoke which pollutes the air every day.

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pollution has entailed health problems

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as heart disease and the illness of the lungs.So

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enhancement of moving industries will solve the problem of air pollution.

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the movement of industry had certain negative effects namely the

economics

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down and supplying goods, it is an extremely positive influence on the environment and construction of buildings.In my opinion,I believe that the benefits outweigh its drawbacks.