The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates three different fast foods that were consumed by adolescents in Mauritius for a 30-
year
period
from 1985 to 2015. Overall
, the consumption of pizza dropped markedly over the period
. In contrast
, the other two fast foods experienced a significant rise in the same period
,
In 1985, pizza was the most liked food among teenagers in Mauritius. which was eaten 60 times
per year
. After that, this
figure declined considerably,
and reached its lowest point Remove the comma
apply
at the end
of the period
, when pizza was consumed only ten times
in one year
. In contrast
, fried chicken was the least consumed food in 1985, only being consumed about five times
a year
. However
, this
figure rose sharply to 60 times
per year
in 2005. After
this
, the figure remained stable until 2010, and then
slightly increased to 62 times
in 2015. In 1985, Mauritian young adults ate hamburgers ten times
a year
. But, this
number climbed continuously, and reached its peak at the end
of the period
with 70 times
a year
in 2015, which was the most eaten fast food in that year
.Submitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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