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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while your are there. Write a letter to the tourist information office. In your letter: - Explain what you need - Say when you plan to be there - ask for information about prices

#holiday #singapore #rent #apartment #tourist #information #office #plan #prices
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to enquire about
cost
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 of renting a holiday apartment in Singapore for a period of 2 weeks. In June next year, I am looking to have our family trip to Singapore. As Orchard Road is one of the main attractions, we plan to stay
nearby
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 the area for ease of exploring
around
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apply
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. We will need an apartment with
minimum
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a minimum
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 of 2 bedrooms and 2 double
bed
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 to accommodate our family members. It will be a bonus point if the living room comes with a sleeping couch
however
 it is not mandatory.
In addition
, we will require the apartment to be furnished with a washing machine, laundry dryer,
a
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kitchenette and internet facilities for added convenience throughout our stay. As we have not been to Singapore before, appreciate
if
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 you could provide some information about how much the cost will be for our
requirement
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. Thank you in advance. Kind Regards, Sally
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task response
Ensure to address all aspects of the task prompt, including the request for information about prices.
coherence cohesion
The letter demonstrates good coherence and cohesion, using appropriate paragraphing and logical structure. The greeting and closing are well-constructed, maintaining a suitable writing tone throughout the letter. However, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity and coherence.
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