Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter •give the details of your train trip •describe the luggage you left on the train •say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to explain my situation,

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23rd March, I travelled with your company from London to York by Train at 6 pm. The line was overcrowded and when I tried to go out of the train, I was in a rush and accidentally forgot one of my luggage in the front of the first wagon. Despite the fact,

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is an old item, it is important and sentimental to me.

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is a small black suitcase with an AC/DC brand sticker on it. It is unique because I made it. Please, have a look at the photo I

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to my e-mail. I would like to request that you contact me, in case you

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my luggage. I am able to move to the nearest train station if you

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. I look forward to receiving your response and hope you will find it. Yours faithfully Mr James

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task response

Ensure all details about the luggage and the actions you want them to take are clearly stated.

coherence and cohesion

Use a more formal greeting and closing for a business letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

153 words

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