Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter •give the details of your train trip •describe the luggage you left on the train •say what actions you want him/her to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to explain my situation,
Thursday
23rd March, I travelled with your company from London to York by Train at 6 pm. The line was overcrowded and when I tried to go out of the train, I was in a rush and accidentally forgot one of my luggage in the front of the first wagon.
Despite the fact, Change preposition
On Thursday
it
is an old item, it is important and sentimental to me. Correct word choice
that it
This
is a small black suitcase with an AC/DC brand sticker on it. It is unique because I made it. Please, have a look at the photo I joined
to my e-mail.
I would like to request that you contact me, in case you Verb problem
attached
found
my luggage. I am able to move to the nearest train station if you Wrong verb form
find
needed
.
I look forward to receiving your response and hope you will find it.
Yours faithfully
Mr JamesWrong verb form
need me
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task response
Ensure all details about the luggage and the actions you want them to take are clearly stated.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal greeting and closing for a business letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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