Many people hold the view that it's better to buy their home rather than rent it.Do you agree with this statement or not.

A lot of citizens get the view that
it's have
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mỏe
benefits
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to buy their
house
than
rent
it.
This
essay will discuss the
benefits
when
buy
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house
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a house
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and the measures that these really helpful for people who don't know. First,
buy
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house
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a house
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can help me
more
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be more
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relaxed and
nevermind
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a
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the
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time
i
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I
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give money
for
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to
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the owner
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owner
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house
.
Example
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, life is fickle so we don't know what will make
me
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us
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waste money at
anytime
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or anywhere.
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buy
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home
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a home
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much
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is much
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expensive
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than
rent
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also
save
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my pocket money in the
furture
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future
.
Second,
rent
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house
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a house
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from
the
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agency sometimes is not useful because they just want to sell
house
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the house
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and
nevermind
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about the
benefits
of
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for
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the costumer
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costumer
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customer
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.It
also
has other
benefits
if we live for a long period it can make me feel not
freedom
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,
for example
, can not do what we like
such
as paint walls, build something
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, celebrate a party.
Lastly
,
have
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my own
house
make me more confident and sure that
i
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already have my own property have
a high values
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high values
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and
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that i
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i
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can give to my family or my generation in the
furture
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future
. Taking everything into account
i
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believe that
buy
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buying
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house
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a house
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have
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has
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far advantage
than
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over
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rent
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renting
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house
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a house
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when we grow up in the
furture
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future
.
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