The bar chart gives information about the comparison of visitors going to distinct museums in London from June to October.
The bar chart demonstrates the statistic of the community going to several types of museums in London,namely the History
Museum
, the British Museum
, the National Museum
, and the Science Museum
,during the next 5 months,from June to October.
Overall
, the total number of visitors decreased considerably over the 5-month period. August seemed in the most popular month among tourists.
It is interesting to note that from the beginning of the month of June,the number of people attending the National Museum
, fluctuated noticeably,presenting the lowest figure whereas
others dedicated an upward trend.Additionally
,the History Museum
's visitors rose sharply,after remaining stable for 2 months,June and July respectively.Afterwards,this
trend decreased dramatically by just over 200 thousand
during October.
On top of that,people attending the Science Museum
decreased slightly by 400 thousand
in July and showed a steadiness during the next months,at that time the number of people visiting the British Museum
reached a peak of 700 thousand
during August.Furthermore
,this
figure decreased moderately,ending with just over 400 thousand
visitors in October.Submitted by arnakaldybai on
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