Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

A glance at a table provided reveals the
number
of 4-wheeled vehicles that were produced in three nations namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
Overall
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trend witnessed in both of the data of Argentina and Thailand, and the reverse was true for that of Australia. In terms of the
number
of cars made in Thailand, starting at 735852 in the first year, the figure accelerated exponentially and continuously to 1162356 in 2006, before going down minimally
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999963 in the
last
year. With regard to the
number
of cars made in Argentina, it launched at 235088 in 2003, followed by a consistent and rapid upsurge at 466098 after six years which was as twice
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itself in 2003. As to the
number
of cars made in Australia, the data
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at 452163 in 2003. After that, there was a sharp recessive growth pattern witnessed after
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half of a dozen years at 245624 which is to merely a half of itself in the first year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Modern appliances
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Cooking time
  • Nutritional value
  • Public health
  • Work-life balance
  • Cultural heritage
  • Food industry
  • Processed foods
  • Packaging waste
  • Social bonding
  • Culinary skills
  • International cuisine
  • Preservatives
  • Additives
  • Contamination
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