The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The given bar chart explains the
exports
performed in 2015 and 2016 of different products within a nation. Similarly
, the table illustrates the percent
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per cent
change
in exports
of
2016 as Change preposition
in
compare
to 2015. Change the form of the verb
compared
Overall
, we observe in 2016 the export of every item remained high as that of 2015, except for Gems and jewellery, which was slightly above in 2015 than 2016’s
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in 2016’s
exports
.
To begin
with, we see that the petroleum products as well as
the engineered goods is showing almost a similar trend i.e., there is an export of almost 60 billion dollar for both of them. Furthermore
, the
agricultural products alongside textiles Correct article usage
apply
also
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same
pattern. For both Add an article
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the same
the
years a total of nearly $30 billion Correct article usage
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exports
were done.
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in exports
In addition
to that, if we have a look at the table we conclude that,
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change
for agricultural
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the agricultural
an agricultural
product
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products
lowest
(0.81%). Correct article usage
the lowest
In contrast
, in textiles
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the textiles
category
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,category
change
was highest recorded at 15.24%. Nevertheless
, in 2015–2016, the proportional change
for petroleum was 3%, for engineered good
, it was 8.5% and Fix the agreement mistake
goods
lastly
, for gems variation was 5.18%.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, change with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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