You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map demonstrates the three different areas of Pellington which are being considered for a new
supermarket
. The A
site
is separated from the B and C
site
with a motorway and railway respectively. In the A and C sites, there is an enormous residential
area
with some public places
such
as an airport, a park, and a traffic-free
zone
. Whilst, there is just an industrial
area
and countryside in B
site
. The A
zone
has the largest residential
area
with a traffic-free
zone
and a park.
Therefore
, it would be the most suitable one for building a
supermarket
. The demand of residents here would be higher so they will need a
supermarket
to supply crucial things and give more convenience for their daily life.
Moreover
,
this
zone
is adjacent to Hampford, a 30,000-populated city. Whilst, the C
site
’s residential
area
is smaller and there is no residential
area
in the B
site
. In conclusion, a new
supermarket
in A
site
is the best choice. It would improve the living standard of people living there.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words supermarket, site, area, zone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population density
  • foot traffic
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • outskirts
  • industrial zone
  • city center
  • commuting
  • accessible
  • proposed sites
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