You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The map demonstrates the three different areas of Pellington which are being considered for a new
supermarket
.
The A site
is separated from the B and C site
with a motorway and railway respectively. In the A and C sites, there is an enormous residential area
with some public places such
as an airport, a park, and a traffic-free zone
. Whilst, there is just an industrial area
and countryside in B site
.
The A zone
has the largest residential area
with a traffic-free zone
and a park. Therefore
, it would be the most suitable one for building a supermarket
. The demand of residents here would be higher so they will need a supermarket
to supply crucial things and give more convenience for their daily life. Moreover
, this
zone
is adjacent to Hampford, a 30,000-populated city. Whilst, the C site
’s residential area
is smaller and there is no residential area
in the B site
.
In conclusion, a new supermarket
in A site
is the best choice. It would improve the living standard of people living there.Submitted by thuylqd76 on
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