The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
This
diagram illustrates how Linking Words
the
electricity is generated step by step in a hydroelectric Correct article usage
apply
power
station.
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Firstly
, the Linking Words
water
that comes from the river is stored in the high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
by the dam, Use synonyms
while
the dam is opened in the daytime and closes at night. Linking Words
However
, in the day time Linking Words
water
flow is used to generate the Use synonyms
power
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the flow has come into the Linking Words
power
station which has reversible turbines and an operating generator. Use synonyms
Moreover
, we can see that there are Linking Words
power
lines to national grids from the generator. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
water
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then
stores in a low-level Linking Words
reservoir
.
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Nevertheless
, Linking Words
in
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at
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,night-time
night-time
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night time
this
system works reversibly. Linking Words
Water
which is stored in the low-level Use synonyms
reservoir
has pumped to Use synonyms
high-level
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the high-level
reservoir
by using generators in the Use synonyms
power
station. Use synonyms
Water
flow is Use synonyms
stores
in the high-level Wrong verb form
stored
reservoir
and the dam is closed at that time.
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, looking for more information, Linking Words
this
figure has shown four main stages Linking Words
about
energy generation from the main step to the Change preposition
of
last
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