Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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competition has rapidly surged among different
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as more choices and
increased
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number of fields are included with more opportunities
while
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other
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side, they leave their
passion
because of the trending occupation. In
this
essay, several reasons and
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of
this
trend are been mentioned in forthcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, most individuals
work
their entire life working in
same
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job
due to
many factors.
Employees
working in the occupation where
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higher wages are being paid and job security because
they
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may have
the
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financial issues so if their child will
work
in
good
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company they will be having good
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lifestyle
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. Another reason is that
due to
peer pressure or even the parental force to pursue their career in
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particular field which is in demand of good incentives and accepted
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society
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they are forced to follow that
instead
of people’s own interest or
passion
.
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, Nowadays, many countries are being developed because of IT
developer
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developers
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so the trend of
this
is ongoing students or
employees
are more stick to
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IT
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the IT
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field in which
specially
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working under MNC companies
instead
on
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any other occupation
which
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they are having knowledge and skill about particular
work
. The dissatisfaction about working
in
particular
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job
instead
of following their
passion
leads to many consequences. On
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hand
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employees
leads
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to physical and mental stress as there is no
fulfillment
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in
particular
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a particular
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profession,
secondly
, if
employees
are not happy
due to
toxic
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environment
which
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leads to no productive
work
,
difficult
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to complete
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the task
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within
deadline
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and
company
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will not
able
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to grow.
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, India has become diverse the importance
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all the fields
have
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been given gradually
due to
these results. In conclusion, following
passion
leads to happiness for some
employees
although
for others they are not interested in
field
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the field
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though they continue to
work
for wealthy life and satisfy their material desires which
also
gives them satisfaction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dread
  • passion
  • inherent talent
  • fufilling
  • career
  • job
  • fulfilled
  • unhappy
  • unsatisfied
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • stress
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • self-esteem
  • emotional well-being
  • potential
  • achieve
  • success
  • personal growth
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