Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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, a considerable amount of different

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to carry out some new research about space and other planets and stars. There are some who opine that spending money for

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of these studies can not be a sensible decision

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taken by governments all around the

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there are a lot of issues on

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that should be paid for them by official authorities. I wholeheartedly agree with

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essay. The first reason why I agree is that in the present

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climate change and the increase of the atmosphere's temperature should be literally considered as a problematic and serious issue by politicians. Our

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is getting warmer gradually and a huge amount of jungles are burning and eradicating in the entire

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temperature rising

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a great number of natural inhabitants have

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wiped out and it causes

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extinction . So,

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's circumstance must necessitate governments to consider more budget for remedy

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some chic actions

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as space exploration. The second reason for

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agreement is that there

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huge number of children and kids who are suffering from hunger and starvation in different lands

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in some

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that are located in the central part of Africa continent. Their quality of

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is low and they need to be helped by wealthier

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those rich

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' politicians intend to entertain themselves with some expensive research and a sizeable majority of their wealth has

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gone to those unjustified aims.

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era when our

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and its inhabitants confront some dangerous and serious conditions and difficulties in

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reality, it is not a reasonable way to spend different

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especially the more developed and richer

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financial resources to explore the space

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their administrations are not sure that these types of activities will be fruitful in the future or not.