Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is said that continuing

going

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to

university

or vocational training is the best way to get a financially viable

career

,

while

there are some people tell that

it

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they

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would rather

to

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have a

job

night after finishing the high-school.

According to

my opinion, both views have advantages for

career

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a career

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in the future.

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writer will provide the evidence.

Firstly

, going to

university

or college,

it

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apply

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enables us

have

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to have

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a large amount of knowledge in

field

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the field

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and improve a

lot

of

skill

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skills

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in

work

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the work

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environment

such

as thinking or the ability to calculate. Most of

relevant

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the relevant

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job

skills.

Beside

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, developing academic information is very needed for

well-paid

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a well-paid

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job

, which is seem considered a compulsory part of billionaire and successful person.

Moreover

,

university

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at university

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in the present,

Student

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Students

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have a

lot

of abilities to develop their

skill

by themselves and easily

to

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get a

job

after study

univerisity

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university

.

On the other hand

, the people who get a social

job

also

have benefits to

career

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their career

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. The first reason, nowadays, the consumption of coffee and milk tea is increasing dramatically. So

that

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, there are a

lot

of coffee

shop

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in

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anywhere. They

also

need mature

student

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students

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and gain a

lot

of opportunities to get a

job

early

such

as service profession, washing dishes and cashier.

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social time,

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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also

can get a

job

in public

are

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such

as

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a library

the library

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library

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, book store even security in

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the park

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park

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.

Those

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That job

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job

can help

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a student

the student

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student

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students

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get some social

skill

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skills

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like

as

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apply

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communication

skill

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skills

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and experiences in

behave

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. In conclusion, having a

job

or going to

university

have advantages to a successful

career

. But to be honest, going to study is still better than having a

job

early.

Furthermore

, we should work and study hard and be more and more

hard working

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hard-working

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