t Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their house rather than rent it. Do you agree this statement or not?

Nowadays, some people hold the opinion of stay

their

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house

are

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better than stay someone’s

house

. So, I suggest

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agreeing

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agree

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onagree

toagree

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this

statement. So

firstly

, when you buy a

house

, the

house

will be under your personal ownership, you can do whatever you want,

you

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and you

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can decorate the

house

according to

your personal taste. You won't have to worry about rent every month, you only need to spend on food and daily living expenses. Another thing is that if you have damaged furniture in your

home

, you do not need to pay for it, you

also

need to repair or buy those things back. When you are in your own

home

, you will feel much more comfortable renting a

house

because you can do what you want and enjoy without being banned or restricted from those activities

while

in your own

home

.

Secondly

, renting a

house

is a very inconvenient thing because we have to live in a

house

that is

quite small in size, we

also

have to pay a lot of expenses

such

as rent, electricity, water and personal living expenses, The amount per month is

also

quite large. Many times when paying the rent late, the landlord will come up and say bad words and not good. If you damage furniture in the

house

, you will have to compensate for the amount

that

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can be 2 and 3 times the normal price.

Thus

, it can be seen that

,

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we should buy a

house

for ourselves so we will live more comfortably, be able to do the things we like in our

home

, do not need to worry about the money each month.