t Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their house rather than rent it. Do you agree this statement or not?

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Nowadays, some people hold the opinion of stay

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better than stay someone’s

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. So, I suggest

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statement. So

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, when you buy a

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, the

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will be under your personal ownership, you can do whatever you want,

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can decorate the

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according to

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your personal taste. You won't have to worry about rent every month, you only need to spend on food and daily living expenses. Another thing is that if you have damaged furniture in your

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, you do not need to pay for it, you

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need to repair or buy those things back. When you are in your own

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, you will feel much more comfortable renting a

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because you can do what you want and enjoy without being banned or restricted from those activities

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in your own

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, renting a

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is a very inconvenient thing because we have to live in a

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that is

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quite small in size, we

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have to pay a lot of expenses

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as rent, electricity, water and personal living expenses, The amount per month is

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quite large. Many times when paying the rent late, the landlord will come up and say bad words and not good. If you damage furniture in the

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, you will have to compensate for the amount

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can be 2 and 3 times the normal price.

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we should buy a

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for ourselves so we will live more comfortably, be able to do the things we like in our

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, do not need to worry about the money each month.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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t Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their house rather than rent it. Do you agree this statement or not?

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