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The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004
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The chart exemplifies the number of managers in a range of sectors dealing with issues in finding
labours
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 over the period starting 2003 to 2004. In each of these years,
it is clear that
,
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the variety of optimal employees had more difficulty in discovery in all sectors including manufacturing, building,
commerce
 and
services
 than unskilled, technical and managerial workers combined.
In addition
, it is noticeable that
commerce
 was solely
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 that owned no percentage of difficulty in recruiting technical and managerial staff in 2004.
Firstly
,
betweeb
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between
 2002 and 2004, the proportion of obstacles in discovering eminent labours in producing rose from 45% to 59% and
rising
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the rising
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 trend was seen in the figures for building and
services
 of 3% and 4%, respectively.
However
 , in
commerce
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 the quantity of difficulty in
rescruiting
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recruiting
 employees,
by contrast
, cut its problems by 6% in the year 2004.
In other words
, technical and managerial labours by 4% in building, 3% in
services
 and 2% in both manufacturing and
commerce
.
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 trends for
discoverying
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discovering
 unskilled staff were significantly similar to finding prime employees in all four careers. It was different from the marginal upward trends of the figures for producing , building and
services
 , the categories of
commerce
 diminish vigorously by 3%.
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